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Very awkward, long, and drawn out. The comedic timing is amateurish, the voices are obnoxious, and the jokes are uninspired.

I know how it must feel when you're an animator and you take a long time drawing something and you want to leave it on the screen for as long as possible so everybody gets a good long look at it, but this really needs to be faster paced. Your 6 minute cartoon feels like it's 20 minutes. The best part was the first minute when things were happening all at once and it threw stuff in your face and didn't waste your time.

I would say the quintessential sci-fi comedy cartoon is Futurama, which is saturated with jokes. It's just funny funny funny over and over again with a gag every few seconds and no boring gaps in between. Yeah, that's hard to do. But you gotta make sure you try to throw as many gags at your audience as possible and find every opportunity to do so. And don't milk just one joke because there's a chance it was never funny in the first place. The red button thing was groan-worthy. I feel like you had maybe 2 minutes worth of quality content, so drawing it out to 6 minutes makes your audience just wanna leave.

So... make the characters charming and likable, pick up the pace, don't reuse jokes, don't draw things out, and be original and inspired.

NewEdenseries responds:

Just wanted to say thanks for the feedback. All good solid criticism that we can use. Look forward to hearing what you think of the Shorts. Cheers!

Don't know why this wouldn't deserve a 5. Great animation, great sound effects, and that cat is an amazing actor.

beccahyman responds:

pahahaha chloe does anything for cat treats. including interrupting my brief departures from reality. thanks for your review!

Mechanazis are jerks.

Cenaf responds:

they deserve not existing. Thats what they do :O

Oh, sex with maracas? I thought he said Moroccans.

Catoblepas responds:

Sex with maracas does raise some questions. As does sex with Moroccans.

Plaque on the wall:

LOS ANGELES COUNTY FOOD SAFETY COMISSION

By order of the Mayor of the Food Kingdom. This Food establishment is deemed worthy of offering food to consumers for consumption.

This decree may be revoked at any time, without notice, whenever the mayor of the Food Kingdom says so.

Decisions made by the Mayor of the Food Kingdom may not be challenged in any court of law, here on Earth or any known or unknown planet, now or anytime in the future.

If you have any questions, they will not be answered.

Container on the counter:

Skin Lotion Industrial Strength

WARNING: Prolonged use may result in zooming in on tiny place-holder text that doesn't really say anything interesting.

ken9000 responds:

Haha! I was wondering if anybody would ever notice this.

Ha ha, Hideo Yamamoto is the manga artist who made Ichi the Killer. Was that supposed to be just a random Japanese name?

nevarky responds:

Yes, just a random name, Hideo came from an obvious place though.

Alan Wake is one of your favorite games? You must be deprived. It was a terrible game, contrived and uninspired. The facial animations and lip-syncing were ridiculously bad. There was nothing new or exciting to scare you, just creepy enemies attacking you as usual, like Bioshock or any number of horror shooters. It's the same thing over and over again throughout the whole game, and it totally fails to scare you. A horror game should have you running for your life all the time, but this game is full of enemies that generally die pretty easily and don't pose enough of a threat to really be scary. Also, the story is lame and has nothing to do with the gameplay. Alan apparently has the power to affect reality with his writing so why not incorporate that into the game? Instead it's given some ill-conceived lip service. Nothing makes any sense and there doesn't seem to be any point to the game at all. The only thing I liked about it was that it was set in my state so the scenery was nice.

Anyway, that's just my opinion. Your animation ain't bad, actually.

RidenerDesign responds:

I don't understand how my liking to one game effects how many other good ones I might've played. Just because your opinion is different doesn't mean that I'm "deprived." I consider myself a pretty casual gamer and have played various other games that I've really enjoyed. The thing that really stood out to me in Alan Wake was the story. Sure, the gameplay can be repetitive, but it's a story driven experience that kept me entertained throughout. I found it original, very inspiring, and above the typical shooter plot. Also, Alan Wake isn't a horror game, it's a psychological action thriller. I don't get why that's such a common misconception considering it's typed on the cover of the game. The gameplay is directly related to the story, even if you have the slightest bit of understanding of it. And certain things you mentioned, such as the lip syncing and incorporating gameplay elements have already been fixed and implemented into the new game. I do agree with you on some of those points, but it didn't take away from the experience at all for me. In the end, it's all just different opinions though. Thanks for the comment!

I love this series.

Guys, right click and deselect play when you're in the office, then zoom in on the list on the wall. It's a guide about how to tell an animal is dead.

SeanAndSuch responds:

Good catch man :) thanks for being a cool fan... we hope you keep enjoying the series.

Nyaarg.

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