Hey, not bad
But I don't get it. Why did they transform? In the flashbacks, it looked like the ghoul had always been a ghoul and wasn't cursed or anything. So did the girl have a curse on her or something? Was she a ghoul and did she get turned into a girl? And I assume she knew what would happen if she kissed the ghoul, so why would the girl want to become a ghoul? And if one of the men kissed her after that, would he become a ghoul? If so, why would he want to do that?