TharosTheDragon's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Captain Tardigrade: Safety Tips]

He checked to see if he was an extremophile by testing to see if he could survive electricity. And he survived. So they shouldn't have concluded that he was not an extremophile.

[Wonders of the Universe 5]

Daily 5th? Not frontpaged? Less than 2 pages of reviews? How did this slip under the radar?

And why isn't the Wonders of the Universe theme music in this?

[Pass the Sticks]

Animation is great, but the voices feel obnoxious and cheesy and forced. Maybe work on making the writing sound more natural.

[Geek Culture]

Where did you get all those videos that play in the background?

[CURSE - Episode 1]

Really nice job with this. You know know your art isn't great, but as strange as it seems you manage to be a good animator despite being a mediocre artist. You got bad drawings that move well. The drawings aren't necessarily that bad, though. The thing that bothered me the most was how high the girl's boobs were.

There were a couple of places where the humor fell flat. When all that treasure randomly falls out the guy's ass right when he denies being a thief, it feels cheesy and cliche. And when the villain says the plot needs an antagonist, that nearly ruins the whole story. You gotta decide whether you're taking this story seriously or not. You can go with the Newgrounds tradition of wacky nonsense comedy, but that doesn't seem to be what this is. You seem to be trying to get your audience to be invested in this, and so your characters are going to need motivations.

I wanna say really good job with the sound effects. I know sound is always a bitch, and your sound design stood out to me as skillfully done.

[Phillip's Song]

When the octopus stops playing, the music he was playing sort of transitions into the background music, so it sounds like he's still playing even when you can see he's not playing.

[A Prank Time]

Is this based off of some real life prank? Do people put shaving cream on sleeping people? Was there something we were supposed to be expecting? Was round kid sticking the can in his old man's eye supposed to play against that expectation?

[Star Wars Christmas Special | TheJamCave]

But... this has nothing to do with the Star Was Christmas Special!

Anyway, the voice acting felt flat and forced. The writing could've been better. "They're not toys" would make more sense as "they're not dolls" because it's kind of weird to not consider action figures to be toys. It's not very funny. The jokes are bizarrely predictable. Are we really supposed to be surprised when his mom takes the mask off? Or when the Millennium Falcon falls on his house? An easy way to improve this would be to pick up the pace. With the weak humor you have now, it's best to compress it so that the audience gets a nice jokes-per-second value.

[The New Sexy YouTube Red]

That music at the end was Kirby's Epic Yarn.

[Peach Dumps Mario]

Where is that burping audio from?

Jae responds:

The same as all the other sounds; Arin and Danny's faces